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We're hosting an open house on Saturday, October 1, 2016 from 1:00 pm to 7:00 pm so you can check us out and have a rocking good time. It will be a day filled with live music, prizes, and good vibes. Prizes include gift cards, vinyl giveaways, and band merch. We will have a variety of food trucks for any munchies you may be craving such as tacos, tots, and deserts. Adult beverages as well as non-alcoholic selections will also be available to quench your thirst you will be certain to work up while jamming and having a good time. So, if you like to jam, win great prizes, have a good time, or just really need to get your hands on some new vinyl, come check us out and say hi on Saturday, October 1, 2016.
• Try a stronger headline like, Rock Out at Our Open House
ReplyDelete• "We're having an open house on Saturday, October 1 from 1:00 PM to 7:00 PM!" - We're hosting an Open House on Saturday, October 1, 2016 from 1:00 to 7:00 p.m.
• Scale back the !
This is much shorter than I prefer, but you've got strong wording that connects with your audience and good details.